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Monday, October 23, 2006

Short Story Draft


A big shot pass really close by his head. The people running and srcreaming, the tanks passing trough and destroying buildings with huge soldier armies, and the bombs falling from the air was not such a strange thing in war. A soldier went by and finally shoot him in the head and as soon the silver bullet reached his head he woke up. It was late for school he had to eat breakfast and take a really quick bath and dress up fast. His mother yelled out "Chris the breakfast is ready, I hope you had already taken a bath". Chris quickly ran and took a bath and suddenly his soap fall down and crashed braking in half. Everytging seems to go bad in the irresponasable life of Chris this day. After the big tasty breakfast, he forgot that he hasn't finished his math homework so he ran and open his big old bluebackpack and took his math homework. His mother called him and remembered him that in few days the report cards were coming so to behave good.

Chris came from school as usually at 2:30pm, very tired he eats lunch and then he takes a nap. When Chris wakes up, at 4:00pm he tells his mom, "Mom is time to go to the tennis classes!” His classes are at Club Cartagena.

Once Chris gets to his tennis classes he ask some of his friends that also go to tennis classes, " what homework to we have due tomorrow?"

"Only the computer homework and the math homework" they answered him.
Suddenly he starts analyzing the homework he has to do and he quickly organizes the sequence of homework he is going to do in his head.

When the tennis classes where over, Chris reaches home and starts doing his computer homework on the computer. Suddenly, when Chris was finishing, the computer restarted because the lights went off causing the computer not to turn off but unfortunately, the UPS (device that prevents the computer to shut down but to continue work for a certain time) was not fully charged so it cause the computer to restart. Unluckily Chris hadn't save his job so all his work was ruined.

The UPS discharged and the computer went off as all the things in the house. Chris didn't know what to do, he thought for a moment and an idea come to his head, "Maybe at the Cafe internet on the other streets there is energy”.

He ran and took some money with him to the Cafe internet to finish his home work but on the way he meets with his mother and he remembers to tell her that Robert, Nick and him has an after school detention because they had their shirt tuck out and didn't had a the belt. Chris’s mom was really angry and he told Chris, "you must be back at 11:00pm maximum or you will see what punishment I'M GOING TO APPLY ON YOU”.

Chris runs keeping on mind the words that his mother has told him.

When Chris enters the Cafe internet starts doing his homework and when he was finished he said to the man that worked there, "I'm going to print this work, May I?

"Sorry we have no paper", the man said.

So Chris without thinking it twice, he runs home, gets some paper, and goes back to the cafe internet and presses print. When two of the 5 pages where printed, the computer suddenly went off and the printing sequence stopped. He was really upset and he knew that is was too late to begin all the work again and also to do the math homework.

The climax comes in when Chris returned home very mad and stressed, he got sick because of the tension. He got high fever and his mother really mad but worried asks him, "why didn't you did this homework last week?",His mom said and she give him a lot of remedies to cure him.

"I didn't thought anything of this was going to happened", he answered and fall to sleep. He was really sick and he couldn't go school next day.

In conclusion this story tell us the not to leave the homework to the last moment because you don't know what troubles you may have fortunately Chris couldn't go school the next day so he saved himself of another detention.

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